1. The writer has a strong closing statement and final 2 paragraphs. The reference to copycat slogans offers nice development of the concept.
2. I think the author needs to add details about the ad itself, omit the information about the ad she (he) didn't use, and organize the structure to keep information closer grouped.
H-Let me know please if you needed more than this. If so, I can revise it. `Chelle
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